Today in writing the Room 2 Tuis looked at a piece of artwork. We talked about what we liked about it, Miss M then wrote a story, and we then wrote what we liked about the painting. Have a look at our stories below.
I like the rose. The sun is soft.
Sophie
I like the colour of the rose. I like
the sun's shape.
Eva
I like the blue leaves. I like the
roses.
Emilia
When I look at the colour on the
picture, it makes me feel happy. I like the white colour.
Delilah
I love the pinkie, red flowers. They are
lovely.
Ben
I like the sun. It is squidgy, it was
cool.
Sam
I like the blue on the leaves. I like
the flowers.
Jack
I love the sun. I love the pinkie, red
flowers
Sean
This painting is very beautiful, a very,
very cool painting. I like the colour of the roses, it is cool.
Gemma
This picture is very beautiful. I love
the colour of the flower. The sun is soft.
Gracie
I like the colour of the sun. It is
bright.
Joseph
I love the picture. I like the hot sun
and I like the dark colour of the roses.
Amy
I like the sun, it looks warm. I like
the colour of the leaves.
Spencer
I love the sun and I love the flowers.
The blue is beautiful and I liked the pinkie, red flowers.
Charlie
I like the colour of the flowers and the
sun.
Elle
I like the colour of the sun rays from
the sun.
Leo
I like the colour of the sun. I like the
blue leaves.
Orlando
I like the sun rays. I like the blue
leaves.
Hawaiki
This painting is warm and colourful. I
love the deep, rich pinkie, red flowers. The sun is glowing softly.
Miss M
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